Critique Please!

They eyes seem to look right out of my screen and into my soul. The hair is nice and wavy, the hand kinda make it look like some sort of tribal thing.
But the eyes...
Oh, the eyes...
They have seen so much...
I was pleased with its ability to make me lose my soul.
It appears to symbolize anguish, torment, and the expression of a whole generation of bitterly disappointed youths, screaming out "WHAT WENT WRONG WITH THE LAST ONE!?" They THRONG over the hills! Shaking, brandishing, THROWING their olive branches and THROUGH their tears and TORTURE they tear apart their TEARS with their TYPHOONS and TRIALS and jump on the pieces! They soar to the sky and see only snakes, only sin, only the blinding misery of the proverbial rapture sent by the gods to cleanse this mortal coil! "RECLAIM THIS WORLD IN THE NAME OF THE PURE!!!!", they scream, "KNOW THAT ON THIS DAY, ON THIS DAY, WE KNOW OUR DESTINY!!!!!"

But yah. Pretty good. I like the shading.